REMAINS STILL
Verse 1:
Keep it simple they said, Keep it simple they said
But we are complex
And their failures will show
That they will never know
What I need, What you need, What we need
Cause their memories remain
Full of heartache and the pain
Of this world that's so crazy
And their whispers turn to yells
And the ringing of the bells deafening
But I don't care because
Chorus:
Together we'll transcend
I'd break where you would bend
These lights are shining bright
And I can't see tonight
But I don't even care
As long as you are there
The world remains still
Verse 2:
And we'll whisper
When it's too loud to talk
And we'll hear each other perfectly
And we'll echo with our voices
And we'll make too many choices
While we're walking down Hollywood and Sunset
They can point at us and laugh out loud
But we don't give a damn about
Cause they will never have what we have
Because
Chorus
Bridge:
Just how deep this can go
Only we will know
Everything that was before
I can't remember anymore
Chorus
Verse 3:
And we'll go and we'll take it alone
And I know that your heart is my home
This feeling is what I'd pursue endlessly
And if everything should end
I know where we have been
But right now we are still
Comments
But even without this it`s already a good song.
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I really appreciate it appreciated it...
hey my man...nice thing here :)
uve got something in ure voice that is just radio
i like this mate :)
goodluck
Certain verses are decent, production is good, but not that good.
The lack of a decent hook for the choruses lets it down, the performances go downhill as the song progresses.
Certainly it hints at your capabilities, good job.
Hey thanks and please check out more tunes: A&R