August Rising

REMAINS STILL

REMAINS STILL
REMAINS STILL Verse 1: Keep it simple they said, Keep it simple they said But we are complex And their failures will show That they will never know What I need, What you need, What we need Cause their memories remain Full of heartache and the pain Of this world that's so crazy And their whispers turn to yells And the ringing of the bells deafening But I don't care because Chorus: Together we'll transcend I'd break where you would bend These lights are shining bright And I can't see tonight But I don't even care As long as you are there The world remains still Verse 2: And we'll whisper When it's too loud to talk And we'll hear each other perfectly And we'll echo with our voices And we'll make too many choices While we're walking down Hollywood and Sunset They can point at us and laugh out loud But we don't give a damn about Cause they will never have what we have Because Chorus Bridge: Just how deep this can go Only we will know Everything that was before I can't remember anymore Chorus Verse 3: And we'll go and we'll take it alone And I know that your heart is my home This feeling is what I'd pursue endlessly And if everything should end I know where we have been But right now we are still
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August Rising’s rating:
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I like this but I want bass and drums to come in. Will you add them later? Reminds me of Snow Patrol. Intelligent track.
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Strong song, could see this being sync'd to something like Heros or similar. Good stuff.
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Like dovetales already wrote - I also miss bass and drums to come in.
But even without this it`s already a good song.
XXX
BABC
Jeff, this is also a great song.
I really appreciate it appreciated it...
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hey my man...nice thing here :)

uve got something in ure voice that is just radio

i like this mate :)

goodluck

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It starts off well, but never goes anywhere.
Certain verses are decent, production is good, but not that good.
The lack of a decent hook for the choruses lets it down, the performances go downhill as the song progresses.
Certainly it hints at your capabilities, good job.
Oh, really nice. Very pure sounding vocal.
Lots of emotion in the vocals, cool hook, good song, post some more!
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Sweet song. It goes smooth and classy

Hey thanks and please check out more tunes: A&R

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